I had only come across one reversal poem before, when some former students, whom I taught to love poetry, sent me one. If you are not familiar with the idea, the poem reads very negative from top to bottom, and at the end challenges you to reverse these ideas and read the poem from bottom to top, in which case it becomes a very positive statement. I was very impressed with the challenge and difficulty of expressing two diametrically opposed views in the space of one poem, without changing any words at all. The poem most work both ways as written. I was daunted. However, last weekend, I bumped into a template for organizing this type of poem, and I thought that might make it more approachable as a form. At the very least, it gave me a starting place, so I thought I would give it a shot. I wanted to write a poem about the Slice of Life challenge, and how it seems impossible at the beginning, but it can be done and it can change our views about ourselves, about our writing practice, about our classrooms, etc. However, my poem did not want to be about that, no matter what I said. It wanted to be about education instead. So here is my first attempt (after some aborted drafts and stuttering starts) at a reversal poem. Read it from top to bottom, and then immediately reverse and read from the bottom to the top. One way is about the messages our culture sends about teaching, and the other is what I believe about teaching despite these messages.
I am a failure because I am a teacher
and I refuse to believe that
I can make a difference
I realize this may be a shock, but
Education changes lives
Is a lie
The education system is a failure
In 30 years, I will tell my children that
I have my priorities straight because
Policy
Is more important than
A child
I tell you this:
Once upon a time
Energetic teachers engaged children
But this will not be true in my era
Standardized testing rules all
Experts tell me
Teaching is easy and teachers are public parasites
I do not conclude that
Exceptional teachers abound
In the future
Only the incompetent teach
No longer can it be said that
Teachers are heroes
It will be evident that
American schools are broken
It is foolish to presume that
Teaching matters
And all of this will come true unless we reverse it.
Bravo! I love it. I’ve read reverso poems and marvel at the skill. Nicely done.
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Thanks! It was hard to do, but I had fun with it.
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This is brilliant and powerful. I’ve never tried this form–it seems challenging indeed!
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I could never have done it without the template that had some of the bridge words and told me when to write a positive line and when to write a negative one!
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A very interesting form, and a very cool poem! I’ve never tried writing this form, but I see how it’s (even more of) a challenge to find just the right words.
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Well done! I imagine this was quite the task, but you did it and it works!! What a way to end the challenge. 🎉
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Well done! That was a real challenge! Perfect positive message in the reverse! And the negative is scary!
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